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I have to say that I'm left completely speechless. In awe. The scene was excellent, amazing, spectacular. This is probably just me being biased beyond words but I absolutely loved Melinda's portrayal to death. It was honestly in one word: flawless. I am so incredibly happy with they way you portrayed her, her family, feelings and relationships. I feel so much for her and I find it wonderfully tragic and bittersweet. I really liked...

SNAP TO: INT. MELINDA’S BEDROOM – LATER In stark contrast to the last scene, it is pitch black in Melinda’s room. She is tossing and turning, clearly in the throes of a nightmare... FADE TO: INT. LOCKER HALL – DAY It is a dreamy version of the locker hall that has come before it. This is a good couple of months early. A shell-shocked Melinda is sitting on a small bench in the middle of the corridor. Katie...

That was BRILLIANT, Claire! I had no idea which way you were going to take that, but you did a great job. Tied up all loose ends and made sure that each character got what they deserved/wanted. I was picturing Vidal's death to be a lot more epic, but the way you followed it with Melinda shooting Cameron was amazing! I thought that Misty was going to kill Melinda for sure! But her letting her live and being too torn up over Cameron's...

Spectacular scene. Lililth was wonderfully dangerous, playing Melinda to her vulnerability to get her locker combo then using it to blow the cover of the BHC. It was a perfect way to do that and I loved how concerned Katie was when she found out. It was a good contrast with Melinda returning home and tossing and turning in her dream. Vidal and David have a conversation that was, in my opinion, undescribable. They bounced so well off one...

I agree with Jack! I loved seeing the disfunction of Melinda's family and how she's torn between her mom and dad. I also love how unnerved she was when she say Jay at her dad's house. It was nice to get the back story on their connection too and how she ended up becoming part of the BHC. Lillith is the perfect villian/hero (depending how you want to look it at). She's very conniving and is good at manipulating her prey; she...

The good thing about Fridays is that I can sit down and read RPGs without feeling pangs of guilt for not studying for next week’s midterms, so let’s get this over with before my conscience urges me to study. Wow, awesome. My mom and stepdad both separately hovered their heads right above my shoulders reading my computer screen. So I turned to them as told ‘em if they wanted to see my choicest porn sites, they...

Great two epidoes! I like te conversation between Vidal and David, Vidal practically ruling the conversation, which was very funny. Lilith has become more of a bitch, and I was desperate for Melinda to open her locker before the cops came. I also like how hesitant the characters became before the shooting, especally Cameron and Misty's disagreements. David swalllowing a razor was something I didn't expect, and my stomach fliped when...

Claire, you have always been one of my favorite writers on the board, and this further proves why! You have always has a knack for compelling scenes and great characterization within the first scene. Your tone and mood for the scene was perfect greating this sort of gray atmosphere with hints at a subversive teen thriller. First of I loved Leon and Vidal who are quite the pair to be reckoned with. They kind of have the buddy relationship as...

Name: Petal June "PJ" Wilkes Age: 16 Gender: Female Orientation: Straight Role: Supporting Appearance: She keeps her appearance very nice. Even to casual events, she wears very expensive dresses, and her hair is always styled into a sleak, stylish bob. She finds herself to be quite short, at 5'5", so she is rarely seen in shoes other than high heels. If she is seen in sandals or sneakers, it often means...

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