Thread: The Beauty in the Beast | Forum | Gaia Online

rimatan_07 When I first started reading the story, it started out in a way that I, personally, didn't like: "Long, long ago..." However, I did read on and found it quite interesting and entertaining. Your writing style is quick and straight to the point, which I appreciated since beating around the bush isn't something most people like, but a little more description of what's happening at the moment would be...

When I first started reading the story, it started out in a way that I, personally, didn't like: "Long, long ago..." However, I did read on and found it quite interesting and entertaining. Your writing style is quick and straight to the point, which I appreciated since beating around the bush isn't something most people like, but a little more description of what's happening at the moment would be good. I was a...

This is exceptional smile I liked it a lot! However, in the very beginning, there were a few things I found error in. "When the meek needed help, he just laughed and passed on by." I would like to see the word 'on' out of the sentence. "The ones that rebelled were burned in their own funeral pry ." I think you mean 'pyre' smile And with this sentence, I get a little confused. I believe...