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Originally Posted by 4321ready
Hi everyone. Here is my SLS profile (4321ready) I hope will be reviewed:
I see that you have edited your actual SLS profile some since you copied and pasted to here, so my review is based on what you have on your actual SLS profile.....
You can link to your SLS ...
Hi everyone. Here is my SLS profile (4321ready) I hope will be reviewed:
Interest Levels
Tame 4 on a scale of 0-4 Couples 3 on a scale of 0-4
Moderate 4 on a scale of 0-4 Males
Wild 4 on a scale of 0-4 Females 3 on a scale of 0-4
Desired Age Range: 18 to 45
Other Info: Drinkers OK Smokers OK
We Are Looking For:
I ...
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Originally Posted by 4321ready
Hi everyone. Here is my SLS profile (4321ready) I hope will be reviewed:
I see that you have edited your actual SLS profile some since you copied and pasted to here, so my review is based on what you have on your actual SLS profile.....
You can link to your SLS ...
If possible, I'd like it if someone reviewed my profile. I'm not actively looking for a couple at this time, but it would be nice to know if I'm even slightly fuckable.
I feel like such a dweeb asking for a review, but if someone wouldn't mind
critiquing mine, I would appreciate it. Please be as honest as you can.
Thanks in advance.
Mr. Essex - I couldn't find your profile? What's your sls name?
Taylor74 - Very nice! It's written intelligently with a bit of humor. A tad long winded at times...but I'm terribly guilty of that myself.
Things i liked:
- The very first sentence is great!
- Good spelling and grammar
- Your overall approach to the lifestyle, and openness to diversity
- Your photo (...
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Originally Posted by aster Mr. Essex - I couldn't find your profile? What's your sls name? I think that it's fixed. If you can't find it, my username on that site is the same as my username here, without punctuation and spaces.
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Originally Posted by Mr.Essex I think that it's fixed. If you can't find it, my username on that site is the same as my username here, without punctuation and spaces. Yep, it's fixed.
Mr. Essex, I took you as a wild man... Not really a moderate one.
Love the tag line!
Seriously? I like the whole profile. You have a sense of humor and...
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Originally Posted by LFM2 Yep, it's fixed.
Mr. Essex, I took you as a wild man... Not really a moderate one.
Love the tag line!
Seriously? I like the whole profile. You have a sense of humor and you don't come off as arrogant. If you lived closer .... Me, wild? Heavens forbid!
I like it. My profile, I mean. I'm going to ...
Quote: Originally Posted by ENCRYPTEDTX I welcome people to take a look at my Swing Lifestyle profile Real Swingers Home Page. encryptedtransmission Any help is super appreciated!! Kyle "**Statistically 98% of you will stop reading after previous statement, but I dare you to continue. " - not really necessary - if they weren't looking for a single guy they wouldn't have been looking at your profile anyway....
Quote: Originally Posted by LikeMinds321 crazi429 ~ I took a look at your profile and you still have this: I love sex but now with Ed and just having a full hip replacement... Change the "Ed" to "ED" I really love anal and would love to share a strap on with a lady some time. Still, I have to wonder if you want her to stick it in you? This is what Julie is trying to point out. If you want the lady to use a strap-on on YOU,...
Re: Singles Profile Reviews Quote: Originally Posted by SW_PA_Couple I don't believe, rathor, that you are interested in S L S. You're interested in meeting couples. Yes? Yep.. Quote: Originally Posted by SW_PA_Couple You don't have any experience of sex yet? Well, that sort of novel approach might bring you some surprising results. You'll have to let me know if this attracts attention. Keep up the good work. And keep it...
Re: Singles Profile Reviews Quote: Originally Posted by N8ture Girl Under describe your self, get rid of the 4th paragraph, its not needed. Make a quick reference of size and add make that your first sentence in the last paragraph. I too recommend this. Quote: Originally Posted by N8ture Girl And if I am not mistaken (someone correct me if I am wrong, cause their everywhere) but you can have those pics (naked, cock shots, etc) on Swing...
Julie : Under the circumstances, I have altered my profile on this and all other sites to reflect my current status. What made you smile? I don't follow you. LikeMinds : I have taken your advice, and pulled the close-up face shots. If I ever decide to go hunting again, I'll consider what you suggest. Thanks very much for your feedback! Jon
Re: Singles Profile Reviews Quote: Originally Posted by Ilove24nik8 Hmm sorry about that, here you go: Real Swingers Home Page. ilove24nik8 Ok, forgive me if I am being nit pickey, I can't sleep and I am bored... Your tag line "Educated, respectful, straight and tall." Straight and tall as opposed to crooked and tall. I don't know it just sounds funny. It doesnt flow right. Educated and respectful go together, but...
Quote: Originally Posted by ncmd_couple DE BBC, I don't normally hit the singles forum, and I'm the male half. From my perspective, if my wife showed interest in your profile, I would trust her. Being confident is one thing, but you border on the boastful. You might try softening the "performance" and tell a little more about yourself. S hmmmmm...perhaps. Thanks.
Quote: Originally Posted by LFM2 Yep, it's fixed. Mr. Essex, I took you as a wild man... Not really a moderate one. Love the tag line! Seriously? I like the whole profile. You have a sense of humor and you don't come off as arrogant. If you lived closer .... Me, wild? Heavens forbid! I like it. My profile, I mean. I'm going to have to change my address in a few weeks, but it's pretty good.
Quote: Originally Posted by SW_PA_Couple Generally looks good. I always cheer those who put a picture in with their profile. Some observations and suggestions: * After my first reading I had the impression that you are not so much looking for sex as you are hoping to develop a friendship with a woman or a couple in front of whom you can pose provocatively while they admire your Johnson. * Seeing the word "educated" in the...
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