Thread: Portrait #3

Kathryn, appreciate very much your comments. You´re quite right I was a bit rushing when I got to that point. In fact the picture doesn’t include that area I extended it so it wouldn’t look too much rectangular. May be I should keep it original and just cut out last inch of bottom side. Don, again thank you for your feedback. Went back and looked to the picture and I think her head rests on his shoulder not touching his arm, but a bit of...

I like how you did their faces - very nice! I do, however, feel that dark triangle of the bathing suit takes away from their wonderful faces. I had a hard time sorting out just what it was and her arm and chest area don't look quite finished.

Hi Pedro! As Kathryn has mentioned, the faces are very well done! Smiles are very difficult and you have done them very well! Generally the heads are fine - and you have done a very good job on the man's hair, as well! The man's body looks pretty well proportioned, but I think a bit more work needs to be done on the woman. Her head seems to be floating a bit - perhaps you need some areas of lighter skin color on her body as well. And...