Thread: Girls, do you like this poem? Age and feedback? - Yahoo! Answers

Wow, I like that a lot, I would totally melt if a guy said that to me. You are really good. The poem flows well and has a good rhythm. Very Romantic

Wow. Absolutely beautiful scene. I can just see it perfectly. Another gorgeous poem. I loved it, really. Beautiful job. (:

As we bask in the warm sunset, The sun frames you in silhouette, The soft gold rays seem to glow, Around your head in a halo, My own angel here on earth, Every minute with you has been worth, The time it took for me to find, Someone with your beauty and your mind, With eyes so calm, cool, and bright, I thank the stars you're in my arms this night, And as we lay in the cool grass, I think the future will surpass, The time...

im 17 and i think it is beautiful and sounds personal to someone?.. whoever it was written for they are lucky

I'm 14 and I think that it's really beautiful You obviously wrote this for a girl and I think she'll love it You're really good at writing poems. Never stop writing :)

Really, really, really good. Prob. the best one yet. It shows that you appreciate her and that you are glad you have her. I agree with the other person. It seems personal, which makes it better.