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Thread: Exposition vs. dialogue...

Started 1 month ago by 2ndchance
Hi guys, I know there are no rules on this subject. So that in mind, are there any views on what is a good balance? In normal fiction, would a good ratio be 20% exposition and 80% dialogue, or 30-70 and so on? Steve
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HBrookhouse replied 3 months, 1 week ago
I might have got this all wrong, but the way I understand it, if there's a main thread running through that which is, effectively, a collection of short stories, .... oh, hum, just thought about the Canterbury Tales - does that solve your problem?

Tobytwo replied 3 months, 1 week ago
I must admit that the inclusion of poems is one of the factors that turns me off fantasy. Along with maps, it seems to me to be one of those things that authors expect to have to include that don't necessarily improve the book at all. Although they can play an important part in making the world more 3D, by providing it with culture and history, to my mind they can easily be more trouble than ...

ventanamist replied 3 months, 1 week ago
Wow, some simple questions demand complex answers. But, unless I missed something in my scan through the thread, no one answered the other part of the query - the one about a quote at the beginning or the end of a chunk of speech. I have a feeling that people will say to just avoid it. Even if its the correct thing to do it would act as a barrier to the narrative flow. Please enlighten if ...

Ursa major replied 3 months, 1 week ago
Probably one of these (depending on whether single or double quotes are used for normal speech): 'And then Terry said, "Friends, Romans, countrymen,"' replied Bob. or "And then Terry said, 'Friends, Romans, countrymen,'" replied Bob. EDIT: Sorry, but I should have included quoted speech in speech. Oops! .

The Judge replied 3 months, 1 week ago
Quote: Originally Posted by ventanamist Wow, some simple questions demand complex answers. But, unless I missed something in my scan through the thread, no one answered the other part of the query - the one about a quote at the beginning or the end of a chunk of speech. I have a feeling that people will say to just avoid it. Even if its the correct thing to do it would...

ventanamist replied 3 months, 1 week ago
Yes. I got that. It's just that, as a reader, suddenly coming across a clump of three commas floating in the air is a bit wierd. It makes you stop and think and read the sentence again. Maybe its just me.

HareBrain replied 3 months, 1 week ago
I prefer the comma/full-stop to be between the two sets of quotes marks. Unfortunately this can't be done where the interior quote ends in a ! or ? (Edit: nor if the interior quote is also the start of the entire quote, which I try to avoid for that reason.)

Ursa major replied 3 months, 1 week ago
Personally, I try to avoid having an interior quote at either end of an exterior quote. (Like ventanamist, I don't like to see the double and single quotes placed side by side.)

Rolynd replied 3 months, 1 week ago
Quote: Originally Posted by Nik Disclaimer: The only novel-length tale I've finished is non-commercial... Um, I had a neat beginning, a taut end and an off-beat prequel. I thought it was novelette length, but the middle just kept growing and growing and growing... Eventually, I lost my nerve. I realised that if I didn't connect to the finale *real soon*, I might...

Dante replied 3 months, 1 week ago
I think that's true for published authors for a different reason. When you're more established, you can put more of the burden of the editing process on the publisher. You're a less risky investment than a debut author and they can be comfortable devoting more resources to your book. Established authors can even submit novels on proposal, which means there's a lot of editing to be done when it ...

 

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