Thread: D'Haleine Legacy

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*waits for the wedding*

Josephine is so sweet...I understand her mother's concern but her words were a bit harsh for a 5 year old What an interesting way to tell a child you're pregnant,

If you've lost interest in this part of the story, then I definitely think you should just do an outline/recap and get to the part of the story that interests you again. As you've said - if you, the writer, are not interested in the story, then it will definitely show in the writing.

Quote: Originally Posted by YrS92 That's what I am intending to do Still, as my story is happening in a Victorian era, the girls were supposed to marry at the age of 16. I'd really like to make my story as authentic as possible, which would occur teens getting married with adults(or teens) If that's not possible here, I'll find some more subtle ways to write the story... Actually the average age of marriage for brides in...

Uh oh. Either Josephine will make things hard for the new guy.. or maybe she will fall in love with him. Could go either way! Good story by the way. I've been reading it since you started.

Ooh, I just finished reading this! All your sims are so gorgeous. The Victorian idea is so lovely visually. Josephine seems to have turned into a rather nicer person overall. Good luck with your novel!

Doesn't Peter just look like the type that'd call a woman "Mademoiselle"? Lol. Nice start and good luck. :}

yay another baby! well YrS92, I've seen you in the forums often and am happy to finally meet you!!! you have a very lovely avatar. I like this story, and the family is great to read about... theres something missing here. I love forward to more posts! Nice job! p.s. I speak french, and j'aime your story! hahahaha.