Thread: But Will It Stay?

Thanks to TCIF and ciaddict for helping with ideas and bouncing things back and forth via late night facebook chats....the end result is this chapter and several other scenes that will come later. Hold on to your seats ladies, life is about to get bumpy! tuda..... Chapter 20 When they arrived at Mr. Peterson's store, just outside Utica, Amy was more than ready to get out and stretch her legs. Bobby laughed at her as she jumped...

This is a fun chapter...well, except for the psycho stalker, that is. I love Amy babbling about Dr. Pepper...so girly from such a strong, confident woman. The description of the vineyard and the house make me wish I were there...and so does the king-size bed in Bobby's room. ::blushes:: Oh! And "Hudson's Harvest Grape Juice"...so cute! I don't know why, but reading "Bobby Goren was a...

YOU DOG !!!! You stopped at the best part !!!!! Hurry up with chapter 7, what did Bobby do??? Forget it just e-mail me the details!!! And tell Amy I said to shut-up she has no right to get involved in Bobby's business. And tell the same to Ross and the cheif of D's, let the man have a little fun. I think....What did he...

Phew! I'm finally getting a chance to sit and catch up on my reading. Great chapters, fm!!! Jimmy Choos and Armani...I'm in heaven! I loved all your descriptions in the last two chapters...Trey missing his wife, Bobby with AJ getting his tux and lunch (iced tea...yum!), and the whole idea of Amy doing a Marylin Monroe impersonation. That's a whole side of her that I never expeted....

Read this the other day, cute chapter; a little out of the ordinary but still cute

Whew! Alot has happened since I last checked-in! There has been playful levity, stress, sadness, and romance, but I think what really shapes these last several chapters is forgiveness. There is a reason we are called to forgive and seek forgiveness, and I think you've captured the reconciliation well in the tone of Bobby and Amy's interactions since. I'm still veeeery curious about this mystery you're...

I had to go back and read a couple of chapters to get back into the story (it's not like it was a hardship or anything - I like reading stories I enjoy more than once.) This last chapter was everything you promised and more. This one line at the end of the chapter, simply did me in.... "Their eyes met, full of understanding and appreciation."

Woo hoo! That was great, it had everything - a wee bit of romance (maybe? i hope so!), then Bobby finally faces the music with the big kahuna (like how that was resolved) and finally, a bit of suspense. More please soon! *helps self to snacks*

Great chapter, and I loved the song choices. They seemed right somehow. More Hudson is always welcome.

Hehe! This was a very funny chapter! Thanks for giving us a good laugh