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Hey, ive been working on some theory and stuff, and i was just wondering if this short lead clip is in the correct key and everything. Just critique it please, i rather have criticisim than compliments. Also, how can i get the lead to cut through better? http://www.geocities.com/black_draxxx/riiff.mp3 Thanks! Drake

Sounds cool!

Good shit! it wasnt pointless shred, It had emotion, I liked that shit. sorry buddy, no criticism. you're good!

Not bad. Pretty clear. Seems like some of the sounds slurred together... may be the recording quality or something.

Lol, berserker I'd like to hear you play those tremolo'd notes and chords at 260 bpm.

Thats not that hard to do, for extened periods of time it can be tiring, but its very possible.

Quote: Originally Posted by berserker just got done with this 10 min ago, the solo still needs some work but you get the basic idea. I tried to write something with a hate eternal feel for the verse riffs tight intro dude

Heres another intro i was working on, just wonder what you guys thought, i know the drum programming sucks, im horrible at it. http://www.geocities.com/black_draxxx/Intro2.mp3 thanks! Drake

Hell yea, That sounded kick fuckin ass. I love it!!

yeah man nice intro! I love how the clean sounds.