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My attempt at the B&B puppy challenge For the purpose of this story The Baby in the Bough never happened - there was no Andy.....   Booth was headed home from a three-week training session at Quantico. Every year, agents are required to spend seven days at the facility going over the newest tricks of the trade. Booth had to attend three at once this time because for the past ...

My attempt at the B&B puppy challenge For the purpose of this story The Baby in the Bough never happened - there was no Andy.....   Booth was headed home from a three-week training session at Quantico. Every year, agents are required to spend seven days at the facility going over the newest tricks of the trade. Booth had to attend three at once this time because for the past ...

That was really sweet. I enjoyed it! Great job!!

I Just Loved -- PPMS

Loved it, especially these lines...... " I'm learning how to deal with him breaking into my house." " Booth looked at the dog and whispered "I'd stalk her too, I've been breaking into this place for years. I don't think she's really noticed yet, though." pps   Edited 6/19/2008 7:24 am ET by Proud2bKiwi

Really enjoyed this :) You got off to a great start with, 'Not one seminar or lecture focused on the things he found the most difficult about his job; arresting your partners family, how to talk to your squints without sounding like a meathead or how to stop touching your partner whenever she was near. ' LOL and it just got better. I bet she did know about St Andrew but  ...

This is good! The flow is good. I think keeping thier bodies moving (standing, sitting, leaning, walking to the bookshelf etc) helps that happen. For me at least, otherwise it's just too much dialogue (which I know I'm a culprit of). So I say yes, good flow. fave lines (so many...so I guess I should say fave, fave, fave lines haha)   Not one seminar or lecture focused on the ...

I was worried that the "St. Andrew" thing being a little stalker-ish but I guess it works. Thanks for the great feedback!

'this was a rare moment when he knew they were on the same page', I love that line. Great story, I could just picture it all happening. Well done.

I like!