Started 5 months ago (2009-07-31 15:44:00)
by lastcall
Love it... just how I felt after my last girlfriend...
Started 1 week, 4 days ago (2009-12-22 07:31:00)
by Gigabitch
Well, my first criticism is about your poor judgment in wanting to send this to her. Don't do that.
Started 2 weeks, 5 days ago (2009-12-14 17:12:00)
by NoName101
You were my
close friend
Felt like there would be no end.
A bond that would for ever span.
You were beautiful.
Soulful.
Admirable.
You made me blissful.
A woman so strong.
Wasn't long before my heart caught on.
But you died.
The night you gave yourself to a man so full of pride.
You now carry his seed and he makes you bleed.
I can only watch as the friend I had faded.
...
Started 2 weeks, 6 days ago (2009-12-14 04:03:00)
by fifteendays
I enjoyed reading this.
I couldn't help but to read it out loud in a dark voice.
Great piece.
Started 3 weeks, 4 days ago (2009-12-08 19:13:00)
by andrea_lansberg
I have
waited so long for this love and this feeling,
Like a mother is longing for her precious child.
Lonely days and long nights without love I've been killing,
And it came,and it's here - so aggressive and wild.
I will not let it go - not of this I've been dreaming.
For it's death I shall cry,I shall break,I shall mourn.
In my sleep on your strong tender shoulder I'm leaning,...
Started 1 month ago (2009-12-02 21:54:00)
by mengyu
Started 1 month ago (2009-11-30 06:56:00)
by Frasbee
Don't worry, I banned the bitch.
Started 1 month, 1 week ago (2009-11-22 12:31:00)
by mengyu
Started 1 month, 3 weeks ago (2009-11-12 04:35:00)
by ging
I think that the poem is written well!