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That's some good poetry! I like the first poem best, I think. Very vivid work!

Wait! There's More.... ---- What Life Is Like Without You If You were to ask me What my life is like without you I would tell you.. Ask a Blind Man Who will never see the morning sun rise Or the crystal blue waves crashing upon the shore Ask a paralyzed person Who will never dance to their favourite music Or be able to complain that their feet hurt from ...

losing weight around the wrists & waist faith in a dream a boy & some bees & his stare into me, perfect & my potential voodoo, working but here I'm left waiting alone in the wind the comfort of a boot hair blowing, blouse loose & I might pull it all out from those few years ago & I just might get it prepared here I'm left waiting & fretting speed up your engines...

In life there will be goodbyes but there will always be hellos. Goodbyes are hard but hellos are something new. Sometimes you think you need something new and sometimes you don't want to lose something that you have had for awhile. Even after you have said goodbye, there are positives that always can be channeled. Good read, kviii, you give a positive feel to something that seems so horrible...

posted: Despite what national surveys may suggest, and despite rumors of its demise, poetry seems likely to persist, in one form or another. absolutely! and we are here to prove this! thanks for posting this, it was an interesting read.

I wanna play!! Who's gonna play with me and Suge ?

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How? Why? Why would You fight beside Me Just to stab Me in the back Why would You fill My heart with love Just to rip it out like that How am I to save Us If a monsters' all You see How can You give Your everything Just to take it away from Me

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That's some good poetry! I like the first poem best, I think. Very vivid work!

Suge posted: You are an interesting writer... Agreed. And not in a bad way. 1 is my favorite. Very interesting, good work.

Vanishing Point Somewhere...before the incessant edge, Prior, up, ‘til the insecure ledge, The puzzle pieces were assembled, And...intervals of glazes resembled, Resonating, clear, not a mirage, The potential in a flesh collage. Then...tangents left their disrepair, Let you linger, immersed in despair. Along latitudes of broken straws, Lay scattered lines you would ...

CRASH At the edges watching broken metal glass and blood, mingle at his feet. Breathe in out suck tragedy from air tanged by spilt diesel. Smile. Absorb the fleeing vestage of life. Hear the dying groan and come. Endings should be celebrated.

OKAY PEOPLE!!! Listen up... Or... Put on your reading glasses Poet Of The Week. The current poet of the week gets to pick the next poet of next week. These announcements are to be made every wednesday so everyone gets a full week of being the poet of the week. When choosing the next poet, be sure to write a few sentences on why you feel that person deserves to be poet of the week. How...

I am enjoying your work. Have you ever read any at an open mic? I think both "sober morning" and "the mischievous goddess" would be great to hear read live. Thank you for sharing.

Ouch! Not a good place to lose anything. I think this is good, but it could be better if expanded. Still, it words good the way it is