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Read and comment ! What do you...
Published (2009-12-23 16:52:49)
Without background knowledge of what ive written before this, it might be hard to get into. Long story short, this character Amaris (narrator) has recently been informed of her past, as a werewolf ! Now she is trying to live a normal teenage life while hiding this secret ability ! Only problem is, enemies attack anytime.. anywhere. Including the girls changeroom at her school ! While trapped inside with the beast, she tries to fight back.......
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no title yet, but heres chapter...
Published (2009-12-14 16:10:28)
I've checked your story over, you didnt leave in an words that needed removing. As for the story itself, I find it somewhat unbelievable that the kid could suffer that level of bullying and not have had it noticed by someone. Also, the doctors, hall monitors, teachers, and the boy's mother in your story are always either rude to the kid or immediately giving out a punishment or a rebuke. This isn't realistic and just feels like...
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is my story looking good enough...
Published (2009-12-15 21:56:50)
it may take a little while, i dont have very much time on my hands at the moment, but when i type something up ill try to post it ASAP. i'm also going to be changing the story line a bit, add a few more conflicts and such. also, a LOT more details, but when i do, please feel free to tell me if u like it or absolutely hate it, all coments are helpful for me trying to publish this book.... eventually. thanks, and im glad some of you like it...
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MGOOY
Published (2009-12-17 18:39:47)
Thanks. Yeah, I do.
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To get everyone in the christmas...
Published (2009-12-19 23:43:37)
Father Figure You called him names, you beat him down, Then you hit him on the ground. You tried to silence all his cries, By putting bruises on his eyes⦠You belittled everything he'd do, You said he'd never make it through, But now he don't rely on you, said, Now he aint afraid of you. You pretend that you miss him, But you only want to hurt him, You say that you love him, You don't even know him, no more. When you...
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Latest active threads on Stories, poems, RPGs::
Started 13 hours, 29 minutes ago (2009-12-24 17:03:01)
by Saki
I actually like this. The way your friend is describing everything , just makes me feel as if Im actually in the characters mind. It is so descriptive and
the character is so well laid out. You really get a sense of who she is and what she is thinking. Its not vague at all. In some parts I would suggest that
it is a little too descriptive, but for the most part very well done !
- Saki
Started 1 day, 2 hours ago (2009-12-24 04:08:06)
by L on a Ring
As for style pretty good, it'd be nice if we had a bit of background though. All I can really suggest from this little excerpt is that you need to reread
your work because there were a few misspellings and some confusing parts:
"The pressure skipped a beat..."
I assume you mean "my heart" and not "the pressure." If you do actually mean what you wrote then you need to explain that because it...
Started 1 day, 13 hours ago (2009-12-23 16:40:20)
by Saki
Wow ! This is very interesting ! Right up my alley I do understand that you use quite the mouthful of description when describing people and feelings,
but your choice of words is great ! How long did it take you to write that first passage? Or better question, how many times have you edited or re-wrote it?
It sounds very good ! Keep up the awesome work !
- Saki
Started 2 weeks, 4 days ago (2009-12-06 06:55:22)
by MicrosoftSam
This might or might not be a interesting coincidence. My name is actually Sam, and yes i am a twin.
Only difference is my twin is a fraternal girl. If i had a identical brother and he did that too me, i would kick his @$$.
I also would not accept any apologize from him whatsoever, and would never let him forget what transpired.
It was a good read, and really hope you write more so that i ...
Started 1 month, 3 weeks ago (2009-11-03 22:37:16)
by Mgooy
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Hot threads for last week on Stories, poems, RPGs::
Started 1 day, 2 hours ago (2009-12-24 04:08:06)
by L on a Ring
As for style pretty good, it'd be nice if we had a bit of background though. All I can really suggest from this little excerpt is that you need to reread
your work because there were a few misspellings and some confusing parts:
"The pressure skipped a beat..."
I assume you mean "my heart" and not "the pressure." If you do actually mean what you wrote then you need to explain that because it...
Started 1 month, 3 weeks ago (2009-11-03 22:49:30)
by perpetually forsaken
No way I can attempt it this year. Got exams in a month.
Started 1 month, 3 weeks ago (2009-11-03 22:37:16)
by Mgooy
Started 2 weeks, 4 days ago (2009-12-06 06:55:22)
by MicrosoftSam
This might or might not be a interesting coincidence. My name is actually Sam, and yes i am a twin.
Only difference is my twin is a fraternal girl. If i had a identical brother and he did that too me, i would kick his @$$.
I also would not accept any apologize from him whatsoever, and would never let him forget what transpired.
It was a good read, and really hope you write more so that i ...
Started 1 day, 13 hours ago (2009-12-23 16:40:20)
by Saki
Wow ! This is very interesting ! Right up my alley I do understand that you use quite the mouthful of description when describing people and feelings,
but your choice of words is great ! How long did it take you to write that first passage? Or better question, how many times have you edited or re-wrote it?
It sounds very good ! Keep up the awesome work !
- Saki
Started 13 hours, 29 minutes ago (2009-12-24 17:03:01)
by Saki
I actually like this. The way your friend is describing everything , just makes me feel as if Im actually in the characters mind. It is so descriptive and
the character is so well laid out. You really get a sense of who she is and what she is thinking. Its not vague at all. In some parts I would suggest that
it is a little too descriptive, but for the most part very well done !
- Saki
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