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"Just can't see who I'm looking for" confuses me as well. I thought the writer, or whoever is narrating this poem, was already looking for someone. And, quoted from the first line, "saw her, the with him" So technically... he/she DID see who they were looking for... Unless you'd explain this all differently?

good lyrics albeit typified music. i look forward to hearing more.

Turn the light, turn the light on me. You know, I don't want to be alone. Turn the light, turn the light off please, I love you, Even thought you don't like to know I care. I never turned my back to a fight, Although I knew my wrong from right. I'll always be there for you, If You'll always be here for me. She's cold, Oh self righteous and bold. Oh the lifespan Of girls cast in the mold, of vultures waiting for old. I...

Quote: Originally Posted by Mick I actually find it easier to write all my lyrics before I come up with a title. If you go in to writing lyrics and have a subject, like death, love etc, you're free to write whatever you want, instead of trying to pick lyrics that will go with the title. If you have any good lines you come up with it easier to incorporate it into the song. Only after I've finished the song and analysed its main...

If it is something I wrote and never liked, I'd hate the song cause I'd feel they're mediocre to the point that I'm better than them. But in what I was talking about, it's usually the idea, and not the sentence ... they usually say it in a better way in the song

Quote: Originally Posted by primo I've only written one verse and a chorus.. It's written as a mid-tempo R&B song. If you critique my lyrics, I will do so for your's - just leave a link and brutally honest constructive criticism! Verse 1 I see her, then with him bite my lip, as I think Will I always be alone? So I slip that mask on Which tells the lie, i’d Rather be on my own Don’t know which...

oh sorry btw...i just read the new sticky. i dunno if i have a generic enough title or anything, so if its gotta be merged into something...well idk

Quote: Originally Posted by AwwSugar It just reminded me of the beginning of the first game. Where he was like, "Is this real?" xD And then it all goes into "Simple and Clean" [= LOL. Thats a very vivid memory from the whole series. That whole intro is amazing.

Pretty good lyrics, 99% of love songs are corny, so I wouldn't worry about it.

Thankyou very much Toasty