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Follow My Lied Yes. That's what I'm saying. And why not? Firstly, because it’s unreasonable for me to think I can please everyone. So far, you’re the only person who’s said that it’s a weak piece throughout and needs a complete overhaul. Fizz has said that she agrees to some extent but also said that doesn’t mean she dislikes it, which to me means I’ll be getting a critique highlighting areas where I could ‘ground’...

ninja_rottwiler just screw it im not doing this! Adi has a fair point, and was not being cruel. Chucking in the towel and sulking only proves that you're not necessary the best candidate to be mature and help others. Consider: how much experience do you have in critiquing, rather than in writing? Why not take the chance and let yourself be helped? You never know what good might come of it. Good luck.

Follow My Lied If you felt that your poem was extremely weak, regardless of what anyone else had to say about it, would you rewrite it? What if he's done everything he believes he could to the piece, and is seeking help from another party just so he can edit? Not everything can be done alone the first time. Nor can a poem be improved beyond any extent without criticism. And so yeah, if he thought it was weak, he would edit obviously. My...

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Username: KIMANI113 Name: Kay Age: Yeah, not so keen on sharing How long you've been writing: Six years Favorite kind of poetry: Free verse, Romance Why you should get help: I believe I should get help because I have been told that what I write is okay. I want my poetry to become amazing literature pieces that students can discuss in class, one day.

Dr.Puffbean anthony naked Quote: Also, do I need to include a sample of my writing, or is that just for poets? Nope. Huzzah! So now what? Reach out to the writers(pm maybe?) or wait to be chosen by one. 3nodding

OneXMuerte said pretty much everything I was going to. You also state things way too plainly; try using poetic devices like metaphors.

K a t ii e H a v o kk That's probably one of the most amazing things I've ever read. It's honestly so unbelievable. This poem made my day. Which honestly takes a lot, considering I'm sick and I'm in really, really bad moods when I'm sick. REALLY amazing though. Keep up the good work, love! Thanks a bunch. Just remember it's a collab a friend and I wrote around this time last year xD

Adimurti meximule Adimurti meximule Adimurti scream if impatience were a virtue, you my good friend, would be the most gifted person. (okay, i exaggerate, but still......) I am gifted! And modest too. stare how could i forget? i'm so unforgettable.... i mean... you're so unforgettable..... (you think i should apply to get help? or to help?) @113: welcome abroad... i mean... aboard! Apply for whichever you think you'd be better...

Of course, no problem. biggrin