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It's okay. Confusing, and there were a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. The pacing is way too fast. But definitely keep writing, practice makes better!

The main problem with this is identifying the characters. I don't even know how many there are - there's a dark-haired one, a blond one, a tall one, an "other" one, and a bunch of "he". You've got to establish which characteristics go together. Don't these people have names?

Physics has shown that far-away objects influence near events. Even the past and the future change the now. Every grain of sand in the universe is integral. But people hold a special place in terms of their effect on me. Thanks.

Walking through the field, Jack was quite confunded. "Well I don't know why i'm here!" he softly said to himself. After a few moments he realized he was alone. "bloody Hell!" He cried out and began to run through the field until. Snap, crackle pop! Kell... I mean Jacks foot landed in the hole of a mole. Naturally the mole was quite pissed, and promptly swore revenge, which sounded like...

Acceptable or not - you don't just forgive and forget something like that in a few years. It may even be permanent, or a 200 year thing. Probably it will persist until everyone is dead who ever knew anyone who knew anyone who was involved in it. Tho the threat may be gone now, still again, it might not. It might BE a cultural thing that could resurface. I'd watch them like a hawk - but realize that probably this thing was a...

I don't know if you've heard of it, but you can try Twilight. Joking. But, you didn't write what kind of books you actually read.

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The Perks of Being a Wallflower. I loved that book in high school.

Ok i have history homework on Edward Jenner The question says. Why was Jenner's work important in the development of medicine? does anybody no why all i know is that he was the first European to use vaccination. what else was he good at that made him important?

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