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user's latest post:
Song For My Little Sister
Published (2009-12-23 16:08:00)
Originally Posted by Chigwinkle yeah sounds good, perhaps stay away from angelic/ spread your wings stuff, it's a little overused. agreed. thanks for your help :)
user's latest post:
My Bands Speak for Me
Published (2009-12-28 04:48:00)
this reminds me of something....hmmm...i wonder what it is.... http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/gymcl...axidriver.html haha, good job though
user's latest post:
need heavy critics
Published (2009-12-23 08:15:00)
okay, I'll try that. Thanks!
user's latest post:
Song For My Little Sister
Published (2009-12-23 16:04:00)
yeah sounds good, perhaps stay away from angelic/ spread your wings stuff, it's a little overused.
user's latest post:
A Harrowing Future
Published (2009-12-25 18:59:00)
i like this piece, especially the first two lines of the second last stanza. the imagery was vivid without being overwhelming.
user's latest post:
Tails - A song about Tails from...
Published (2009-12-28 12:07:00)
its alright. way too much use of the f' word though, that makes it sound just ridiculous and trite. its a word to be used sparingly, not to be put in front of every single noun or verb you have.
user's latest post:
need heavy critics
Published (2009-12-23 08:20:00)
Originally Posted by xmy.only.exitx the problem with your pieces is that all of them lack the machinations essential to make poems sound good - metaphors, imagery, alliterations, etc. you've just gone ahead and stated what you felt in the simplest words possible and that helps sometimes but not in your case. try to learn more about the different kinds of poetry and how its technicalities. maybe then you'll get better. This, and...
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let me know what you think
Published (2009-12-22 23:34:00)
Ooo yeh ur right i was heading out so i just finished it. but the two dots is just how i type. i do it in text messages too.. I duno y i do it.. i guess i should keep it out of my writing. Do u guys have any tips or anything? i just started getting into writing poetry and i really want to eventually be able to write songs that express what im trying to say.
user's latest post:
I wrote some lyrics for the...
Published (2009-12-28 01:19:00)
Well guys, thanks for the criticism. I appreciate it. As you might be able to tell, lyrics aren't my strong point, but I'm trying to get better. So, being my first lyrics in about 3 years... Do you think this is a good starting point? I mean, I'll keep writing no matter what.... So yeah, idk, suggestions for better lyricism?
user's latest post:
I wrote some lyrics for the...
Published (2009-12-27 05:51:00)
Originally Posted by drzafs Stay down! (I want your guilt to eat you alive) Stay down! (I want your guilt to eat you alive) Stay down! (I want your guilt to eat you alive) FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIL
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Latest active threads on Share Your Lyrics and Poetry::
Started 2 days, 13 hours ago (2009-12-28 12:07:00)
by mulcahy67
its alright.
way too much use of the f' word though, that makes it sound just ridiculous and trite. its a word to be used sparingly, not to be put in front of every single noun or verb you have.
Started 3 days, 1 hour ago (2009-12-27 23:40:00)
by tdunks523
this is clever, i like it
Started 2 weeks, 4 days ago (2009-12-12 20:36:00)
by ElephantGun
I really like this! Especially the first bit. I can kind of connect with it. Very pretty song, it is quite beautiful actually.
Really honest.
Started 4 days, 8 hours ago (2009-12-26 16:43:00)
by drzafs
I hate to be 'That Guy' but I was really hoping for some lyrical criticism. So bump I shall.
Started 3 days, 15 hours ago (2009-12-27 10:04:00)
by mulcahy67
im not sure youre actually looking for criticism here.
but if you are, its pretty awful.
Started 4 days, 11 hours ago (2009-12-26 14:25:00)
by silentstar1134
I like this. I like the imagery you used and your metaphors. Only suggestion would be that the true meaning of the poem gets lost in the vivid imagery.
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Hot threads for last week on Share Your Lyrics and Poetry::
Started 1 week, 1 day ago (2009-12-22 17:05:00)
by insanechick94
is there room for peace in the future?
are people too bloodthirsty?
filled with hate, regret, and plans for revenge.
carnivorous, dangerous, malicious evil,
or life, liberty, pursuit of happiness.
religion, personality, and culture set us apart,
constantly competing, always a race
absolute chaos do we soon face?
homicide, abuse, terrorism,
global warming, poverty, disease.
they're just...
Started 1 week, 1 day ago (2009-12-22 17:18:00)
by insanechick94
hm. well. i cant be constructively hateful here. but i really like it. its pretty deep. and makes sense.true concepts. but as im inexperienced. i have no helpful comments. sorry.
Started 4 days, 8 hours ago (2009-12-26 16:43:00)
by drzafs
I hate to be 'That Guy' but I was really hoping for some lyrical criticism. So bump I shall.
Started 1 week, 1 day ago (2009-12-22 16:10:00)
by Akissforher
4/5
i like this, its kinda cheesy but i like it, especially
'im doing my best to show you affection,
you can wear all my lies, keep them close for your protection,
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Started 3 days, 1 hour ago (2009-12-27 23:40:00)
by tdunks523
this is clever, i like it
Started 2 days, 13 hours ago (2009-12-28 12:07:00)
by mulcahy67
its alright.
way too much use of the f' word though, that makes it sound just ridiculous and trite. its a word to be used sparingly, not to be put in front of every single noun or verb you have.
Started 2 weeks, 4 days ago (2009-12-12 20:36:00)
by ElephantGun
I really like this! Especially the first bit. I can kind of connect with it. Very pretty song, it is quite beautiful actually.
Really honest.
Started 3 days, 15 hours ago (2009-12-27 10:04:00)
by mulcahy67
im not sure youre actually looking for criticism here.
but if you are, its pretty awful.
Started 5 days, 6 hours ago (2009-12-25 18:59:00)
by xmy.only.exitx
i like this piece, especially the first two lines of the second last stanza. the imagery was vivid without being overwhelming.
Started 4 days, 11 hours ago (2009-12-26 14:25:00)
by silentstar1134
I like this. I like the imagery you used and your metaphors. Only suggestion would be that the true meaning of the poem gets lost in the vivid imagery.
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