Started 1 month ago (2009-11-19 08:06:00)
by b'ini
Quick comments - you're getting really close.
I think the timing feels slow in parts. You can shave a few seconds off the intro and get to "welcome to my reel" quicker. Have your name and contact info come in as he starts to speak that way it stays up longer. (repeat the info at the end) The bouncing boxes look floaty. Have them hit the ground quicker/harder and the whole jump could move ...
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